Recent Comments

2/2/19, 1:13 PM
I think the premise of this story is good, but you could really use an editor, to help clean up your many spelling and grammar mistakes, as well as to give you some feedback on pacing your stories and developing your ideas.
Anonymous
2/2/19, 12:36 PM
Super hot!
Anonymous
2/2/19, 12:28 PM
I love a hairy man. And grungy this story is really good. But if he loses his job how can he afford the house. I am so curious I can't wait for the next part.
2/2/19, 12:22 PM
Nice story. I love slow redneck transformations, he losing hygiene skills are so hot. I feel like there is an error on the weekend description as Timmy is shown getting out of shower, when he can't do that at the time.
2/2/19, 6:01 AM
<3 Thanks so much, guys.
2/2/19, 5:01 AM
Ah. then you'll just have to wait for Chapter 2! ;-)
Anonymous
2/2/19, 4:51 AM
you stopped before the good part! i was looking to see him transform once faced with that daddy dick, and wanted a full account of him getting fucked silly
2/2/19, 4:42 AM
A tale as old as time, but you did it exceptionally. I like how he went full circle using his dominance to eventually fullfill his desire to be dominate
UchihaDEMS
2/2/19, 2:34 AM
Its nice to see you're back <3
tonywoolf@btinternet.com
2/2/19, 1:58 AM
Please.....more, more, more! That was great - could we have a second part hearing his thoughts when being fucked........? Thanks