Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/2/19, 4:11 PM
another hot chapter... thanks for sharing... look forward to reading many more of your works...
Corinthian
2/2/19, 4:07 PM
Very nice build up - thanks!
alienmaster1@yahoo.com
2/2/19, 3:01 PM
i will try to fix it up on part 2 i wear all rubber gear it inspires me
Mutabear
2/2/19, 3:00 PM
It is an interesting story idea, and I enjoyed the content of the story, but it was a little hard to read due to some grammatical errors and some places where sentence structure was confusing.
2/2/19, 2:59 PM
Thanks Orc-Br - the continuity issue is now fixed. Amazing how often errors creep in no matter how many times you look at something to check.
Anonymous
2/2/19, 1:37 PM
Is comment of luxus having beautiful eyes a hint that the villians have been brainwashed too?
Anonymous
2/2/19, 1:16 PM
Hot!!
2/2/19, 1:13 PM
I think the premise of this story is good, but you could really use an editor, to help clean up your many spelling and grammar mistakes, as well as to give you some feedback on pacing your stories and developing your ideas.
Anonymous
2/2/19, 12:36 PM
Super hot!
Anonymous
2/2/19, 12:28 PM
I love a hairy man. And grungy this story is really good. But if he loses his job how can he afford the house. I am so curious I can't wait for the next part.