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longingslave
2/3/19, 6:38 AM
Fuck, this is _the_ best story I have read in months if not years. I really hope there will be many more chapters to come. Amazing!
drgnawbones@gmail.com
2/3/19, 5:07 AM
Intensely erotic, even as a one-shot it feels complete and hot as hell. Nicely done!
Jake
2/3/19, 4:52 AM
I just recently found this story. What happens to them back at the farm?
2/3/19, 2:55 AM
Still there : "As I step out of the shower, still feeling groggy, I hear someone hammering on the front door. It turns out to be a delivery man with a van full of some very large boxes and crates. “Delivery for Mr Mullen,” the guy says."
muscledrain
2/3/19, 2:14 AM
Fantastic story so far. I love everything about his transformation, both mentally and physically. I hope Timmy gets some muscle on him!
Anonymous
2/3/19, 2:10 AM
I really liked this story! I would have loved if it the ages were reversed tough. Still a great story!
muscledrain
2/3/19, 1:46 AM
I can't wait to see him really change into one of the builders! Great story, man.
May 13, 2012
Anonymous
2/3/19, 1:12 AM
You know, I wonder what happens if a person beats level 200? Does he become the controller? Gain a few slaves? Or something else?
Mdlftr
2/3/19, 1:02 AM
Very clever! I loved the humor, such as Noah was slumped on the bench, seemingly as tired as if he had actually exerted himself. He had convinced the gym teacher at the beginning of the semester that he shouldn't be showering after class because he would just get sweated up on his way home and have to take another shower there. Therefore, by skipping the shower at school, he was economizing water and doing his part to save the planet. or This afternoon, though, he and Tyler were seated on the floor opposite one another, staring at the strange bottles they'd been given. Noah dared to open the cap just enough to smell its foul stench. "I'm telling you, they're shitting us. Literally," Noah insisted. "All the jocks probably got together and shit in a blender and now they're laughing their asses off at the idea that they convinced us to drink it. Those yellow bits are probably undigested corn." "And I'm telling you, I think the coach is giving the players special food to make them bigger and stronger." "Yeah, but it's probably steroids or HGH or something else that'll turn your balls into BBs."
Anonymous
2/3/19, 12:45 AM
I love it when authors combine smoking and hypnotism! This story is AWESOME.