Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/30/19, 2:24 AM
100% agree with the above comments!
1/30/19, 12:51 AM
The discord chat is legit real, but I don't see ND1 getting taken quite so easy.
1/30/19, 12:50 AM
HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
1/30/19, 12:46 AM
I like how you brought a mind control story not to a made up scene, but to our scene. What better place for a Master to start getting his slaves than here?
Anonymous
1/30/19, 12:09 AM
Apparently I need to find this discord chat!
1/29/19, 11:49 PM
As short as this was, I really liked it. I liked that you kinda broke the fourth wall and what you did with it after. Good job. :)
Marktree6
1/29/19, 11:18 PM
Apart from the brothers sex - i love this series. & looking forward to seeing where it goes in the coffee shop
Mdlftr
1/29/19, 11:15 PM
Great humor: "Despite his confused feelings, Otto could not help but smile at this remark. Klaus patted the handsome young peasant’s hand. “That’s better, darling. You have a very pretty face when you smile… Don’t spoil your lovely looks by being an old sulky pants…” Otto laughed."
Mdlftr
1/29/19, 11:07 PM
I love the grimly humorous comments on the action: Otto looked down at the bureaucrat’s crumpled body and whistled appreciatively. “Now that’s what I call seriously ‘fucked up’…”
Mdlftr
1/29/19, 10:57 PM
Igor's back story is very interesting! It is a great lead up to the trip to Europe and to our vampire buddy, Vlad Tepes! I'll admit I did not see that coming! Great writing and build up! The description of the end of the "silly old priest of Osiris who converted Lord Tadese is humorous: as well as appropriately chilling: “Egypt was occupied by the Romans at the time and the silly old thing got caught feeding on a centurion one evening and was immediately arrested. They crucified him that night and, as soon as the sun rose, his body burst into flames and burnt to ashes…”