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Marktree6
1/29/19, 11:18 PM
Apart from the brothers sex - i love this series. & looking forward to seeing where it goes in the coffee shop
Mdlftr
1/29/19, 11:15 PM
Great humor: "Despite his confused feelings, Otto could not help but smile at this remark. Klaus patted the handsome young peasant’s hand. “That’s better, darling. You have a very pretty face when you smile… Don’t spoil your lovely looks by being an old sulky pants…” Otto laughed."
Mdlftr
1/29/19, 11:07 PM
I love the grimly humorous comments on the action: Otto looked down at the bureaucrat’s crumpled body and whistled appreciatively. “Now that’s what I call seriously ‘fucked up’…”
Mdlftr
1/29/19, 10:57 PM
Igor's back story is very interesting! It is a great lead up to the trip to Europe and to our vampire buddy, Vlad Tepes! I'll admit I did not see that coming! Great writing and build up! The description of the end of the "silly old priest of Osiris who converted Lord Tadese is humorous: as well as appropriately chilling: “Egypt was occupied by the Romans at the time and the silly old thing got caught feeding on a centurion one evening and was immediately arrested. They crucified him that night and, as soon as the sun rose, his body burst into flames and burnt to ashes…”
Anonymous
1/29/19, 10:45 PM
I loved the vampire humor! (Not being able to see your reflection being such a nuisance...) I also love the political commentary on the state of the times during the revolutionary year of 1848: “Europe really has become a complete bore. In peacetime we are plagued by bureaucracy and in wartime we are threatened with destruction. All this recent unrest and revolution is jarring my already beleaguered nerves. We need to travel to somewhere less modern, more uncivilized, more anarchic, where regulation and the rule of law hardly touch the lives of those who live there…” Spoken like a true aristocrat! I can't wait to see what happens next ......Look out, Mark Twain and also the Vampire Lestat! Someone from "the old country" is coming for a visit!
Anonymous
1/29/19, 8:53 PM
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absman420
1/29/19, 6:09 PM
MORE, SIR!
Anonymous
1/29/19, 5:47 PM
damn thats hot
Aug 1, 2016
absman420
1/29/19, 5:29 PM
This is a good story, SIR. I like the character waking up to a complete new reality. Worked well.
ForgottenCradle
1/29/19, 4:23 PM
certainly not enough comments. this is a hidden gem. I love the concept and hope it will be continued