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Anonymous
1/29/19, 10:30 AM
AMazing story! I hope you write a lot more!
Anonymous
1/29/19, 7:55 AM
im very excited to read what CJ does to these men !! hope the chapter comes out soon !!!
Anonymous
1/29/19, 5:51 AM
all your series are so hot man. Glad I found this one too!
Anonymous
1/29/19, 4:03 AM
This is one of the best-written stories that's ever appeared on the site.
tonywoolf@btinternet.com
1/29/19, 2:00 AM
Yeah you must tell us about the success Eddie has with Jacie's son - Max has some great ideas for them all!
LongtimeFan
1/29/19, 1:50 AM
Another brilliantly sad story...so often we see a curse from the perspective of the person who's BEEN cursed. Watching an "average" person gradually fall under the spell's reality-warping--to the point where he's AWARE of the changes, but unable (and perhaps unwilling) to stop them--is both an interesting take that adds sexiness and tragedy. Well done... P.S. Anonymous poster above: I wanted to know more specifics, too! :p I actually have a guess as to what happened...maybe Wesley will tell me if I get it right! :p My theory: Brock offends a mage of some kind at his school, and is hit with a curse of obedience--he has to follow the commands of an "alpha" male, to the point where he can't even use a bathroom or have good hygiene without permission. The curse also makes him gradually transform, so the more he obeys, the bigger and stupider he gets. He's forbidden to talk about the specifics of the spell, and instinctively drawn to be dominated. Any man who comes in contact with Brock (hinted by his father, Hunter, and the truckers) will be compelled to take him as their slave, and similarly transform into more of an "alpha." The most dominant alpha (Hunter, in this case) can also warp other men's appearances and behavior, perhaps as a further demonstration of his mastery. As an escape clause, the wizard tells Brock that if he can successfully reach his campus by the beginning of the semester, the spell will be broken...knowing full well that whoever has "taken" Brock by that point will be too transformed by the curse to let it happen. It's a way of making him feel hopeful only to snatch it away, a favorite trick. That's my fanon! :D
Anonymous
1/28/19, 11:01 PM
i really liked this story, however i found that it ended so abruptly that we dont get to find out what/who cause Brock to change. I personally like to know the cause of a change, so that i can guess/fantasize if it will happen again or was a one shot change
nycboot
1/28/19, 10:21 PM
Haven't had a chance to read this thoroughly yet, but it reminded me of your experiment from years ago where you had (physical) parallel narratives for the Brock and Brick. In that story I wanted to dislike Brick but wound up finding him much more interesting (even though I very much despise smoking).
Rik
1/28/19, 9:30 PM
Great as always- good writing & sexy.
Anonymous
1/28/19, 6:16 PM
amazing! cant wait for more!