Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/26/19, 7:08 PM
Hypnothrill, this is what is called "race play", a fantasy, just like your "Caravan of Love" story. As a latino, I could have easily been offended by your caravan story, but I know this site is about fantasy, and I don't want to stifle any sort of creativity. So please do not stifle Elan's creativity by insinuating his story was racist when your story could easily be interpreted that way too.
1/26/19, 6:16 PM
love it!!!! I can't wait for the next cap... <3
Anonymous
1/26/19, 6:09 PM
Don't let the failure of a few misguided souls discourage you from doing what (a) you enjoy and (b) have an obvious talent for. I, for one, am really enjoying this story and the progression of the story and characters. It's well written, seems well planned, and is very hot. I don't write, but have been reading on here for years. And, I've seen very few instances of people stealing other's work. I'd report it on the other site mentioned and let their moderators handle it. But don't let it discourage you. This story has quite a few followers on here, and judging by the votes, very well liked. There will always be assmites about. Don't let them change you.
Lentez
1/26/19, 4:58 PM
This is getting interesting... A suggestion though, after collecting every men of the founding Justice League members (I want both Hal and John present). Peterson is worried about his hypnosis being broken and created a failsafe like a Mind Control Cock ring similar to Superman's red kryptonite cock ring. But this will ensure them to be loyal and obedient sex slaves. After taking over the Watchtower, he is basically the king. Putting key men in position of Authority under his control, even Lex Luthor will grovel his feet just to taste Mr. Peterson's cum. Thinking of Justice League men only wearing leather bdsm costume is just engaging. Hope you continue this further.
Anonymous
1/26/19, 4:53 PM
The sex part of the story is hot. Had the professor been the imposing 'white dude', then I would have had more problem with the color issues. The professor in that instance would have been in a 'master' position by virtue of the control he exercises as teacher. But with the student in control, I'm not sure it matters. It's such a fine line that requires tact in storytelling.
Anonymous
1/26/19, 4:50 PM
Seconding LongtimeFan. Your work has broadened my perspective over the years in many ways -- yeah it's pretty twisted, but hey, there are other sites for "not twisted." Great writing, nice story, thanks for continuing to share with us.
Anonymous
1/26/19, 4:46 PM
A few less questions and parrot responses would be nice, example- "where are you going?" "where am i going?" "yeah where are you going?" "i dont know where im going."
Cubwriter30
1/26/19, 4:37 PM
Wow! this was great! Love the original idea, hope theres more to come!
LongtimeFan
1/26/19, 12:48 PM
That was INCREDIBLE! What an ending! Tragic, revolting, and heartbreaking...Bruce's inner monologue after his second transformation was pure poetry. The line "Nothing had changed...just the filters" was beautiful, and the horrible nihilism as he approached the depths of his issues--"Because happiness would require change, and work, and admitting that something inside himself didn't want to be happy..."--was both terrifying and achingly familiar. Only you could take the idea of "Man turns into pig" and turn it into a stark look at gay dating, power dynamics, and the anxieties that, I think, plague many men in our community. Well done, sir. Well done.
1/26/19, 10:58 AM
The choice was purposeful, but less about economic status, and more to keep him relatively young.