Recent Comments

1/26/19, 10:35 AM
I am removing the change in speech patterns at the end though, I sense it will make a lot of you uncomfortable and adds nothing to my personal enjoyment of this kink.
1/26/19, 10:28 AM
I went back and forth on the dialect, and on writing this story at all to be honest. As a black man who finds this kind of thing arousing I find myself in a weird space to occupy.
1/26/19, 10:26 AM
I'm a white guy, and so I don't want to get all self-righteous about racial representations that make me uncomfortable. But for me, this story's allusions to the history of African-American slavery (and the transformation of Jaxson's speech into stereotypical slave dialect), cross a line into white supremacist territory.
1/26/19, 9:45 AM
Remaining her's, should now be fixed. There are some parts I feel could do with being re-written, but I figure it's not my story, so I've just done the bare minimum to fix the obvious problems. If anybody else wants to re-write the necessary bits, feel free to do so. Just make sure you give credit to the original author.
KL
1/26/19, 9:22 AM
Will you still plan to write the "jocks disappearing one by one" story? That sounds very interesting!!
Anonymous
1/26/19, 9:18 AM
Wow! Seems like you had read my mind. My first love broke my heart and I have always thought of doing exactly what Jack did
Anonymous
1/26/19, 7:58 AM
What you need now,is to introduce a drug called ROAR,that makes a cock bigger,users more TOP.Bet it would be popular amongst the criminals.?
1/26/19, 5:05 AM
Thank you to those who have commented so positively - it is very motivating. Why 'The Lost?' Well, when I originally conceived the story, it was going to involve a much younger 'professor' character who invented the nanite conversion process and used it to exact revenge on a group of rich, privileged jocks who had taunted him at university for being geeky/gay/lower class/bad at sports. The straight jock characters were going to disappear one by one, with the main protagonist [the nicest of the jocks] acting as a kind of amateur detective trying to track them down. I called it 'The Lost' and wrote one chapter before conceiving the present version of the story. The title does not fit this newer version so well, but I guess you could say that the synthetics are lost to humanity [and perhaps to God?] because they are no longer actually human.
Anonymous
1/26/19, 5:00 AM
Always loved this one. Thanks for bringing it back.
LOHWPR
1/26/19, 4:39 AM
So well written