Recent Comments

Martin
1/23/19, 8:04 PM
Hey Willie! Would you like to see your story with the pictures embedded inside the text? I'd do the editing if you want me to.
Anonymous
1/23/19, 8:00 PM
Well done transformation and mind control story- Spoiler alert: It was amusing that our protagonist unwittingly directed his own changes by the answers he gave to the questions asked. It kind of makes you think that the patrons have done this before! [No!] I noticed that the patrons themselves ran the gamut of physical and vocal types - they seemed to enjoy baiting Jeff into mentioning the most gay stereotypic action he could think about. It was interesting that the older man at the bar thought of the "gay tribe" as a separate group that spoke its own language, even though the gasping and high pitch of Jeff's new voice were obviously an affectation, even there. I mean, "Appletinis??" Who says gay guys don't like beer? What do bears drink? Very well executed and well written. I learned some new words - e.g. "whale tail" - Hello Urban Dictionary! I agree that the story stands alone. The other POVs would be repetitious
Anonymous
1/23/19, 7:23 PM
Das Doktor's boys ! Another good story.
1/23/19, 6:36 PM
yes! loved this story. great work.
Anonymous
1/23/19, 6:19 PM
Oh, this has got to continue! I'm still hard.
Anonymous
1/23/19, 5:49 PM
So hot! Loved it!!
Jan 23, 2019
Anonymous
1/23/19, 4:52 PM
I came and howled and it was great ! Thank you !
Anonymous
1/23/19, 4:18 PM
Fantastic story with superb details. I look forward to seeing what else you have up your sleeves...
Mdlftr
1/23/19, 4:07 PM
Great mind control story! I LOVE the last "suggestion" from Andres - he turned them all into his harem! Talk about manipulative! That'll show them - after they changed his life - he now controls their lives! Good one!
Anonymous
1/23/19, 3:25 PM
Thanks for this great story!