Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/21/19, 4:40 PM
I read the updated chapters and they are great! My favorite chapter so far was chapter 4, so please really get into the humiliation of Nightwing (if that interests you). Thank you for this fantastic story!
nycboot
1/21/19, 4:28 PM
Hopefully Angus programmed Ali/Sven with some special code so that when the special password is heard, he reverts to...something else. Thanks for addressing the need to redo Hassan in some manner. Of course you have this story all written, but....since you reminded us of Hood's previous life...maybe somehow that can be activated when he's needed to fight Yaqub?
Anonymous
1/21/19, 4:07 PM
cannt wait to see how the professor reassemples Hassan's body!
Anonymous
1/21/19, 3:31 PM
I'm hard.
1/21/19, 3:29 PM
I loved this when you posted it on Tumblr and I love it here again.
TimNJ
1/21/19, 3:18 PM
This was really good! I hope there's a sequel detailing the dynamic between the grandfather and grandson. Plus they should invite other teammates to the island.
Jesus Lopez Gonzalez
1/21/19, 2:58 PM
Wished I had the power to change straight boyz! Good story to relieve myself of my woody!
oz
1/21/19, 2:54 PM
enjoyed the transformation of attitudes. I also enjoyed the B&N transformation. my home town had an old Blockbuster go the same route. I enjoy your writing. You move along...enough details to wank but not get bogged down Keep up the good work
Anonymous
1/21/19, 2:48 PM
Oh.. If only that curse had the young store clerk have His alpha way with the new camp Brett?
Anonymous
1/21/19, 2:44 PM
wow, please keep writing!