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Anonymous
1/19/19, 7:16 PM
love it, but i feel like the whole youtuber thing didnt really contribute to the story much
Anonymous
1/19/19, 7:15 PM
Yes, the prison was a great place to infect ! Great story :)
Mdlftr
1/19/19, 6:27 PM
I enjoyed the story. The descriptions of the butt slapping, quasi- homo erotic interactions between the two soldiers in front of Ryan were pretty accurate. Guys are full of contradictions. Anyone who has spent any time at all in an all-male environment has heard the quasi-flirty, quasi-stereotypical jokes, the "Oh you're so gay" -while slapping at someone's ass or nuts - It's all very realistic. Once someone tries to label "what's going on here" is when the denials start -- "Hey man, just joshing around - No homo!" Yeah---right--- Guys "joke" around a lot. Whether it's a joke or a come-on disguised as a "joke" or just f8cking with your mind, it's all there. It happens. The fantasy part here for Ryan is that he gets accepted into "the tribe" of soldier boys. Sure, he's "Straight" now (whatever that means) but he's actually in a more homosexual environment all day -- sweaty, muscular, dudes, all running around in uniforms - grunting, swearing, flexing, whatever --TOGETHER-- how is this NOT a wet dream for him? Look at what he now has - close, intense relationships with healthy, fit men of a similar mindset and beliefs. Forget the labels "gay" "straight". What's the behavior? Looks pretty "gay" on many levels! If "being a soldier" makes it more acceptable (to whom?Society at large?) then why sweat it? I enjoyed it. My only quibble would be for more muscle descriptions! "Big, bulging, Massive, STRONG" etc. etc.
Anonymous
1/19/19, 6:07 PM
very nice so far feels like the beginning of something hot!!!!
ForgottenCradle
1/19/19, 6:05 PM
I'd really like to make use of Frederick's services
Anonymous
1/19/19, 5:53 PM
I LOVE the chapter that Thad was writing in the book that predicted his eventual fate: Very well done~! My only suggestion - more descriptions of the muscle growth - especially chest, arms, back, legs and butt! Thad's writing could be a premise for a genuine academic article. Is that YOUR day job? LOL! ideas for a new chapter: “The Dumber the Sexier?” “Is the American mind in decline?” Thad wrote. “Perhaps. But does it really matter? How much does intelligence matter anymore, in an era when computers can do all kinds of thinking faster than us, better than us? Perhaps it’s time to surrender the realms of pure intellect to the computers and instead savor the pleasures of the flesh.” “For those of us who live the life of the mind,” Thad continued, “the sight of an obviously dumb man might fill us with resentment. But behind that resentment, isn’t there a bit of envy? When we see the stereotypical meathead jock who spends all his time on his body and neglects his mind, don’t we wish we had that luxury? To simply empty our minds and obey the animal urges coursing through our bodies? To eat. To flex. To fuck.”
Mdlftr
1/19/19, 5:34 PM
Good writing, as usual from you! The details, such as men leaving the meat sauce on their faces while chowing down on plates of ribs, were compelling. I'd love to read more detailed descriptions about the changes to the servers - maybe a description of their growing pecs pushing up against the t-shirts? I loved the father's comments "that can't be sanitary" - about the exposed pit hair. Can't wait to see what else is going to swell up and pop out! lol
Mdlftr
1/19/19, 5:19 PM
Good description of the growing mind control. Even though the narrator tried to avoid being drawn in, the "beef stew" from lunch seems like it was spiked to set him up to "be ready" for the programming. Also, did the transformed guys get "a REALLY BIG DICK and a FUCKING HOT BUTT"? The story needs more detailed descriptions of the post-transformation guys!
Anonymous
1/19/19, 5:12 PM
The idea is hot but it needs more detail, more breathing room. I especially wish there was more detail in the transformations. But I love that these "straight" men are too himboed out to see they're 100% gaybros.
Anonymous
1/19/19, 4:28 PM
This is amazing! When is the next chapter coming out?