Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/19/19, 3:26 AM
Subject matter is interesting, but couldn't go through the jumbled mess of sentences and name changing constantly. A little bit of editing will go a long way to make this readable.
Anonymous
1/19/19, 2:45 AM
I hope to read more of this series..... Good work!!!
Ringer
1/18/19, 10:54 PM
I can't wait for the next part : D
rubaluva
1/18/19, 10:47 PM
Brillant! This really needs a Part 2... and 3... and...
transformheaven
1/18/19, 9:41 PM
@ForgottenCradle, I hope to continue this anytime soon, pretty busy tho so might take some time. Thanks for your comment tho!
Anonymous
1/18/19, 8:20 PM
Hoping to see more of this!
1/18/19, 6:16 PM
Thanks for your kind words, anon! Also, if you want Hal Jordan, then Hal Jordan he is. To those who might be interested: I've revised chapter one. The update should be available once approved by admin. :-)
Anonymous
1/18/19, 4:56 PM
i need more!
ForgottenCradle
1/18/19, 3:30 PM
I finally got around to reading your chapter. even hotter than the first it's quite some time now but do you plan on continuing?
Anonymous
1/18/19, 3:00 PM
I am loving this series so much. Shame that it might come to an end. I love your unique forms of mind control designed for each character. It is marvelous. Can't wait to see how you turn the green lantern into another puppet of Peterson. I do wish that you convert a few more villains I find it hot that they become docile to the heroes as well. Because Peterson. Really just wants what is best for his slaves.