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Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
1/17/19, 11:01 PM
Love open humiliation going on, wish that was me there.
Anonymous
1/17/19, 10:53 PM
thats how mafia works.
Anonymous
1/17/19, 10:35 PM
Das Doktor ! When do we start ? :)
Mdlftr
1/17/19, 9:57 PM
I love the gradual mind transformation - interesting with lots of teases!
Mdlftr
1/17/19, 9:51 PM
Hmmm.....those staticky TV screens...is there something there? Like mind control messages, perhaps? Good start! I just wish it had muscle growth as well, but that may be coming later.....?
Absman420
1/17/19, 9:43 PM
I LOVE THIS!!! well done -- keep going please!
Dec 27, 2016
Mdlftr
1/17/19, 9:11 PM
I LOVED this! The idea for revenge "as a benefit", growing huge muscles and hair - and sexy!! Very well done revenge story - the warlock pushed every button Aaron had in the course of getting his revenge - muscle, huge size and strength, hair and looking like Aaron's own family! Zing! I'd like to meet the narrator and talk about a little "revenge" for myself! Great job, Garrix!
Dec 8, 2018
1/17/19, 8:53 PM
You're absolutely right, Mdlftr. It's the repeated exposure to the subliminal messages in the music playing on the gym's soundsystem that brainwashes the narrator. And of course the same hypnotic music was playing on the workout files Dave sent to the narrator.
Dec 8, 2018
Mdlftr
1/17/19, 8:46 PM
You are very good with both the muscle descriptions and the descriptions of the growing mind control. One question I had with this story - was the narrator changed by the music blasting over the PA system? He only heard the message on his friend's player for a few minutes. Was that intended to be enough to change him? He started to change BEFORE he ever got the shirt or the player or spoke to Master Wayne. I love the muscle growth associated with mind control stories - please keep writing them!
Anonymous
1/17/19, 8:36 PM
Totally serious story, right? I mean, no sarcasm or nothing, right?! Bro!! Thumbs up for an unusual take on a familiar story. DUDE!