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Dec 8, 2018
1/17/19, 8:53 PM
You're absolutely right, Mdlftr. It's the repeated exposure to the subliminal messages in the music playing on the gym's soundsystem that brainwashes the narrator. And of course the same hypnotic music was playing on the workout files Dave sent to the narrator.
Dec 8, 2018
Mdlftr
1/17/19, 8:46 PM
You are very good with both the muscle descriptions and the descriptions of the growing mind control. One question I had with this story - was the narrator changed by the music blasting over the PA system? He only heard the message on his friend's player for a few minutes. Was that intended to be enough to change him? He started to change BEFORE he ever got the shirt or the player or spoke to Master Wayne. I love the muscle growth associated with mind control stories - please keep writing them!
Anonymous
1/17/19, 8:36 PM
Totally serious story, right? I mean, no sarcasm or nothing, right?! Bro!! Thumbs up for an unusual take on a familiar story. DUDE!
1/17/19, 6:42 PM
Nice work, keep it up
Anonymous
1/17/19, 6:22 PM
What's happening in the next installment? I find the story super hot and would love to see it being continued !
Anonymous
1/17/19, 5:58 PM
I want to see him refuse his new condition till he ends up with balls the size of grapefruits (at least) and he and his friend fucks. damn im getting hard just thinking about it xD
Anonymous
1/17/19, 4:30 PM
please continue this
Anonymous
1/17/19, 4:04 PM
Das war wundervoll. I can't wait to see how life changes.
jemsea13
1/17/19, 6:56 AM
Loved it. I sure hope there's more to come!!!!
Anonymous
1/17/19, 5:39 AM
damn this was hot. you write so well!