Recent Comments

1/17/19, 4:26 AM
I'm not even into all of these kinks, but I couldn't *not* read this. Amazing writing on all points, but especially worldbuilding!
Anonymous
1/17/19, 3:46 AM
i wish you wouldve focus on the hypnosis more. its a good story though, would love to see u continue
Anonymous
1/17/19, 3:28 AM
Nope, don't get the whole degradation and humiliation thing. Was hoping the story was going to reveal itself to be a break down and rebuild better story, but it's gone lower than I care to follow.
Anonymous
1/17/19, 3:27 AM
An interesting SciFi story with an unforeseen outcome.
Anonymous
1/17/19, 2:15 AM
more please
Anonymous
1/17/19, 1:50 AM
It is a testament to your incredible writing ability that aliens with insect-like characteristics are part of such a sexy story. Thanks for writing this story and your other contributions to this site.
Anonymous
1/17/19, 1:21 AM
Awesome story! I'd love to see this continue.
David S
1/17/19, 1:07 AM
This is one very well-written Sci-Fi story. I actually didn't find it "disgusting", I thought it was a beautiful pro-creation story! And really hot! :) Thank you for writing it!
Anonymous
1/17/19, 12:18 AM
I have to agree with the above. Basic details like continual mixing of Brian and Brain should not be happening (though any spell check will not pick this up as both are valid words). This distracts the reader from the story. Also the bulk of the story needs to be punctuated and formatted better. Sentences are joined and jumbled. The concept it great but it is hard to keep focus on the story.
Anonymous
1/16/19, 11:43 PM
my god, i fingered myself so hard while reading this, be my daddy