Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/16/19, 3:39 PM
Glad you are back and writing again! I know its too much to ask but PLEASE write more often
Anonymous
1/16/19, 3:35 PM
Excellent writing as well as a hot premise.
1/16/19, 3:08 PM
I really appreciate the new header featuring "archival stories", which reminded me of Dutchutch's work and led me to discover this gem I somehow missed the first time around.
Anonymous
1/16/19, 2:15 PM
so so good cant wait for more! well written and very hot
Anonymous
1/16/19, 12:21 PM
This story is quickly becoming more and more disturbing
captainjack
1/16/19, 11:21 AM
I love the way you write about superpowers it sounds so real and descriptions of dom's psychology is one of the best too.
Anonymous
1/16/19, 9:20 AM
Honestly it's time to off Wegner and let these boys have a better life. This isn't hot it's just cruel and dark.
1/16/19, 6:14 AM
This was a bit of a guilty pleasure, in more ways than other stories. But it was quite hot to be honest with you. Very fun!
Jan 15, 2019
david
1/16/19, 5:57 AM
i'm gonna feel drugged and locked in a cage until the next chapter. Please write fast! By the way, this story is so *hot!!* Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful imagination.
Anonymous
1/16/19, 4:02 AM
Why don't you edit Chapter 1 before you start writing Chapter 2? This was awful. The story is great, but it was unreadable. Is the character's name 'Brian' or 'Brain'? Do us a favor: run spell check and grammar check at least once before you post your story. Great story. It deserves better writing. Try it. You'll find your readers will appreciate it. In fact, I promise: I will read it again if you edit it and post the fixed version.