Recent Comments

1/15/19, 8:33 AM
I like this story and it excites more and more, but it would be better if the victims do not forget what you did to them, but you could just force them not to say anything to anyone so as not to create problems.
degoetz@yahoo.com
1/15/19, 8:11 AM
Loved it. This site needs more dramatic physical TF. :)
1/15/19, 7:33 AM
@Heru Kane: And you said you didn't want to read any gay-to-straight stories!
Anonymous
1/15/19, 7:12 AM
it was surprisingly skillful to turn this controversy into another solid dumb jock transformation story.
1/15/19, 7:10 AM
I really found the calls and such changes pretty hot. It's a great concept.
1/15/19, 7:07 AM
This is a pretty sexy story, especially what happens to the fathers. Though I must admit to be sad at the way the two gay guys lost their sweetness.
Jan 15, 2019
1/15/19, 7:05 AM
This is a well written story. So thumbs up to you for it.
Martin
1/15/19, 6:52 AM
I love the story, especially in the light of the recent controversy of course. Still, it's almost as painfull for me to read how these two sweet, cute, sensible, emoathic boys are turned into single minded, red-blooded, testosterone driven, muscle jock boys... I guess this type of man is just not my thing. Still, thank you for that marvellous story!
Anonymous
1/15/19, 6:35 AM
I found the subject matter distasteful (I accept that I may not be the target readership) but was more annoyed by the quality of the writing. Lots of typos like "like it being drained from his head", "once it the shirt white" and "made a kiss on Ryan" among others. Far too many run-on sentences. It's not against the law to use a full-stop once in a while. Using commas instead of full-stops doesn't work. Other issues include random words capitalized in the middle of a sentence.
Jan 5, 2019
sw904513@gmail.com
1/15/19, 5:49 AM
cool story what happened on deviantart why did you stop posting>