Recent Comments

Martin
1/15/19, 6:52 AM
I love the story, especially in the light of the recent controversy of course. Still, it's almost as painfull for me to read how these two sweet, cute, sensible, emoathic boys are turned into single minded, red-blooded, testosterone driven, muscle jock boys... I guess this type of man is just not my thing. Still, thank you for that marvellous story!
Anonymous
1/15/19, 6:35 AM
I found the subject matter distasteful (I accept that I may not be the target readership) but was more annoyed by the quality of the writing. Lots of typos like "like it being drained from his head", "once it the shirt white" and "made a kiss on Ryan" among others. Far too many run-on sentences. It's not against the law to use a full-stop once in a while. Using commas instead of full-stops doesn't work. Other issues include random words capitalized in the middle of a sentence.
Jan 5, 2019
sw904513@gmail.com
1/15/19, 5:49 AM
cool story what happened on deviantart why did you stop posting>
Anonymous
1/15/19, 5:23 AM
Very smart lol
1/15/19, 5:21 AM
Hahahahahahahahahshahahahahahahahaha
Willie Cici
1/15/19, 4:38 AM
Kudos to you for your ingenuity and your incredibly well-written story. I read everything you write. This was a pleasure, especially in light of recent postings.
Anonymous
1/15/19, 4:32 AM
That was incredible. Loved it. Great.
1/15/19, 4:30 AM
That's an awesome, pretty unique take on the gay to straight kink! :3. I love it
1/15/19, 4:27 AM
This is a very clever story indeed and extremely hot - thank you for writing it.
Jan 13, 2019
RynSmkr
1/15/19, 4:06 AM
Mal Great to see another story from you ... it's been awhile.