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Anonymous
1/15/19, 5:23 AM
Very smart lol
1/15/19, 5:21 AM
Hahahahahahahahahshahahahahahahahaha
Willie Cici
1/15/19, 4:38 AM
Kudos to you for your ingenuity and your incredibly well-written story. I read everything you write. This was a pleasure, especially in light of recent postings.
Anonymous
1/15/19, 4:32 AM
That was incredible. Loved it. Great.
1/15/19, 4:30 AM
That's an awesome, pretty unique take on the gay to straight kink! :3. I love it
1/15/19, 4:27 AM
This is a very clever story indeed and extremely hot - thank you for writing it.
Jan 13, 2019
RynSmkr
1/15/19, 4:06 AM
Mal Great to see another story from you ... it's been awhile.
Anonymous
1/15/19, 3:58 AM
awesome piece! i love the anonymity of the person who is causing the changes
blankbot
1/15/19, 3:55 AM
I love this series...
nycboot
1/15/19, 2:55 AM
While we're in the middle of a plot line, allow me to compliment you on your interesting technique of shifting point of views. You have it in this story, but you are placing a sectional line in between the multiple narratives which makes it very easy for the reader. In Belial's Legacy (which is probably my favorite of your stories) you didn't have such a line. I remember trying to sort out the voices in the beginning as you shift back and forth between Belial and Adventis. Once I became used to it I recognize it in all of your stories - sometimes more intense, sometimes less so. It's a very cinematic technique (of immediately cutting to a different voice or perspective) but it has a nice effect in writing. I'm looking forward to see what you do here.