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blankbot
1/15/19, 3:55 AM
I love this series...
nycboot
1/15/19, 2:55 AM
While we're in the middle of a plot line, allow me to compliment you on your interesting technique of shifting point of views. You have it in this story, but you are placing a sectional line in between the multiple narratives which makes it very easy for the reader. In Belial's Legacy (which is probably my favorite of your stories) you didn't have such a line. I remember trying to sort out the voices in the beginning as you shift back and forth between Belial and Adventis. Once I became used to it I recognize it in all of your stories - sometimes more intense, sometimes less so. It's a very cinematic technique (of immediately cutting to a different voice or perspective) but it has a nice effect in writing. I'm looking forward to see what you do here.
1/15/19, 2:22 AM
I like to think of this story as a confirmation that straight men in groups (military, sports, fire and law enforcement, etc) have a level of repressed homosexuality. They become very close, nudity is extremely comfortable and is seen in more than just getting dressed after a shower, the horse play becomes homo-erotic. These men would do more for each other than many gay or straight couples would for each other. Ryan wanted James in his own homosexual way, as James wanted Ryan to be in his own repressed homosexual way. Maybe in the future, Ryan will get the upperhand and bring them both into a sexual man to man relationship. Getting the upperhand is a common thread in most stories. It was sad to read all the negative comments. If you don't like the grammar and sentence structure move onto a new story, ditto for the theme. Or in the words of this site, "I wanted to look away, but I couldn't. The story repulsed me, yet I had to read on. My mind became fuzzy and I was dizzy with rage. And then I began to type. Rage and insecurity were my Masters now. I would obey."
Anonymous
1/15/19, 1:46 AM
Dang :-/ It was going great, but there was no conclusion with Steve dumbed down and blissful :(
Anonymous
1/15/19, 1:33 AM
the control is hot, the transformation is not. too bad it wasn't an SPH transformation
1/15/19, 12:46 AM
Nicely done. Reminds me of a "Black Mirror" episode I watched last week.
Anonymous
1/15/19, 12:46 AM
Excellent work
Jan 13, 2019
David S
1/15/19, 12:11 AM
I always love your Skinhead stories, sir!! I hope to see more. Thank you!
tomozco
1/14/19, 11:56 PM
Another good one from Hypnothrill! Interesting that this one starts with the people already transformed. A good start, I look forward to the next part...hopefully you'll carry the story through a full day's programming! :)
gaudi400@gmail.com
1/14/19, 11:39 PM
cannt wait to see what will happen in the Emirate