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Jan 13, 2019
David S
1/15/19, 12:11 AM
I always love your Skinhead stories, sir!! I hope to see more. Thank you!
tomozco
1/14/19, 11:56 PM
Another good one from Hypnothrill! Interesting that this one starts with the people already transformed. A good start, I look forward to the next part...hopefully you'll carry the story through a full day's programming! :)
gaudi400@gmail.com
1/14/19, 11:39 PM
cannt wait to see what will happen in the Emirate
Anonymous
1/14/19, 11:21 PM
another great story, would love to see a sequel to Dr. Thickenstein. Want to see the machine used on some pecs
Anonymous
1/14/19, 9:12 PM
I know most guys love the 'dumbing down' but I like men being lucid and knowing what they are doing and getting. I wonder if the next installment will have Bill's morning wood poking into Danny's cheek ?
Jan 13, 2019
Anonymous
1/14/19, 6:09 PM
Loved the story!
1/14/19, 5:56 PM
I've revised this chapter slightly. Nothing drastic - just a few language issues I wasn't happy with. A big 'thank you' to those who have commented for your kind words.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
1/14/19, 5:07 PM
will we see more of this Masterpiece?
Anonymous
1/14/19, 4:48 PM
loved it!!! but I don't think I can watch morning TV again...
Fan O' gay2str8
1/14/19, 4:11 PM
Okay y'know I can accept that I'm an idiot and practically brain dead but for the life of me I cannot figure out how in any way shape or form that this story is "written badly". Multiple people have said this now but have offered no direct criticism or examples of the mistakes they talk about. I would argue that there have been way more badly written and executed stories comparatively that get no flak whatsoever and in fact I've seen the opposite happen where something I consider to be written terribly or has many glaring misspellings or mistakes get lauded as gold. I think there are just a lot of salty individuals that don't like the content of the writing but would rather it seem more justified or legitimate so they just want to pick on the writing. Funnily, people were able to understand all of it enough to be quite offended over it, mistakes or not. I'm sorry to Rozza22365 for all of these ungrateful people that want to silence others for their own comforts and have chosen your story to do it with. This has happened plenty with Orrin (in regards to this particular theme and plenty of other authors for much less: an example would be health-shaming someone that writes fantasy and fiction about obesity) before though so... not unexpected for this close-minded community.