Recent Comments

joaopomilio@hotmail.com
1/14/19, 5:07 PM
will we see more of this Masterpiece?
Anonymous
1/14/19, 4:48 PM
loved it!!! but I don't think I can watch morning TV again...
Fan O' gay2str8
1/14/19, 4:11 PM
Okay y'know I can accept that I'm an idiot and practically brain dead but for the life of me I cannot figure out how in any way shape or form that this story is "written badly". Multiple people have said this now but have offered no direct criticism or examples of the mistakes they talk about. I would argue that there have been way more badly written and executed stories comparatively that get no flak whatsoever and in fact I've seen the opposite happen where something I consider to be written terribly or has many glaring misspellings or mistakes get lauded as gold. I think there are just a lot of salty individuals that don't like the content of the writing but would rather it seem more justified or legitimate so they just want to pick on the writing. Funnily, people were able to understand all of it enough to be quite offended over it, mistakes or not. I'm sorry to Rozza22365 for all of these ungrateful people that want to silence others for their own comforts and have chosen your story to do it with. This has happened plenty with Orrin (in regards to this particular theme and plenty of other authors for much less: an example would be health-shaming someone that writes fantasy and fiction about obesity) before though so... not unexpected for this close-minded community.
1/14/19, 4:07 PM
I'm not loving the vitriolic tone of this debate, but I will say it's inspired me to start work on my own "Gay to Straight" story (with a twist).
Anonymous
1/14/19, 4:03 PM
Now it's just getting creepy - kidnapping and attempted mind control. Get out of there, Daniel!
Anonymous
1/14/19, 3:59 PM
Several unclear possible clues here: the person behind Daniel on the stairs may or may not be the fighter from the first story; the murky liquid Daniel is given to drink - what is it?; All the locks on the door, with the key on a chain around Bill's neck - is someone being kept out, or kept in?; the sweat - is that a pheremone to control Daniel? The mystery deepens......
Anonymous
1/14/19, 3:51 PM
Interesting that such a frail, self-conscious teenager would suddenly decide to insert himself into a physical argument between strangers. Given how quickly his interference ended the fight, and Bill's odd comment, I'm suspicious that there is more to this situation than first appears: No, I guess not!” Daniel replied. He saw Bill smile, which in turn made him smile. “But, why were those guys beating you up?” “Ah, just a business disagreement. Don’t worry about it, it’s all solved now, thanks to you!” Hmmmmm.
Anonymous
1/14/19, 3:51 PM
Fucking hot!!!!
Anonymous
1/14/19, 3:49 PM
Apart from the problematic content, this is just badly written as well. Maybe it's just my country but don't get where "straight equals masculine" comes from. Gay guys I know are a lot more stereotypically macho than today's metrosexual straight "bros."
Anonymous
1/14/19, 11:56 AM
i also applaud this story; if you're going to ban gay-to-straight then please ban all the (tired, cliche) straight-to-gay stories as well. this story turned me on so much