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ForgottenCradle
1/13/19, 8:12 AM
MORE. more of this please
waki001@hotmail.com
1/13/19, 6:49 AM
My vote is on the commissioner ... also the ending seems ... abrupt :D ... i love the build up- but could need a bit more time to really get into the sexy bits :D ... but thank you for writing this, I definitely enjoyed it
MrSirTurtle
1/13/19, 6:09 AM
I like the idea of the victims being aware of everything. It makes it so hot. Instead of having them forget about CJ, you should just make it so they cant harm him or turn him in in anyway. the incest is like the best though. i also like the idea of puppy play. but again, the aware factor makes it the best part.
Anonymous
1/13/19, 5:30 AM
I liked how you took control of Cyborg. The minddraining piece was well done. I only wish it was longer! How much do you feel you have left in the series?
Anonymous
1/13/19, 3:00 AM
Can't wait to read more!!!
1/13/19, 1:40 AM
Soooooo hot, I love every part of it, came twice at each part ........ Please, let this story go on, and convert all the boys tho muskloving
Anonymous
1/13/19, 1:07 AM
the switch between the jerome and joseph name is a little confusing.other than thati am super invested in this series. ot would also be nice if the chapters were longer though! you are doing really great though and i mean that from the bottom of my heart!
Anonymous
1/13/19, 12:50 AM
keep em coming dude! I LOVE IT. I also love the diversity of race in this story. Have indians and middle eastern on your next few chapters. their man scents are particularly muskier imo
Anonymous
1/13/19, 12:19 AM
im surprised that i didnt read this series sooner. this story has got eveything i wanted; sweat fetish, muscles growth and straight to gay mind control
Anonymous
1/12/19, 9:14 PM
awesome! keep it up! CJ should meet a big fat nerd guy - like a student at the campus IT desk or something after CJ has wifi trouble -and reduce him to an overgrown puppy, just a sweaty, hairy dog, constantly trying to get at CJ's :3