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Anonymous
1/10/19, 12:23 AM
look forward to reading more!
look forward to reading more!
1/10/19, 12:22 AM
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Anonymous
1/10/19, 12:17 AM
So the boys were 17/18 at the start then 18/19 later on? Might want to edit any suggestion of non-adult sex.
Anonymous
1/9/19, 9:06 PM
Awesome! I cant wait for more! It would be great if Master has more slaves at home, and know each of its stories
1/9/19, 8:33 PM
@HeruKane Thanks for commenting. The next chapter has a bit of buttplay. Hope you'll enjoy it.
1/9/19, 8:13 PM
I like how they keep themselves normal in public. I think that is so much better than a bouncing that change. I also really like the buttplay and such is really sexy. and that's my main fetish I really want more of it. ll in all good stuff.
Dec 31, 2018
1/9/19, 7:54 PM
This was surprisingly a very hot, sexy piece. I can't get over the fact that the asshole glowed with light. I also like how the effect varied based on who looked into it. Makes me wonder what would happen when a gay man looks into it. (I would hope that a dominant gay man gets to kerphis mind.) Good stuff.
nycboot
1/9/19, 6:12 PM
What a great start! It's interesting: in your historical fiction you need a lot to orient the reader to the time and place. But here there is almost no setting alluded to, so you get right into it. I'm looking forward to this!
Anonymous
1/9/19, 4:15 PM
Excellent!!
axis4320@yahoo.co.uk
1/9/19, 1:47 PM
Fun Christmas Story for new angle, very enjoyable read