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10/24/24, 8:45 PM
This Taylor thing has my attention and as always Jack, you’ve hit another home run. I love the Parker’s.
10/24/24, 7:28 PM
Your stuff is always great, but I especially love how well you write stuff with unaware programming... the way you wrote Jack so causally talking about doing laundry or toweling him off is *perfect*. Really excited to read the next chapter when it comes out.
10/24/24, 4:52 PM
As soon as I read, "a sticky, black coating" I mentally shouted 'yes'! Rubber is back on the scene! And I really liking the mix of metal and rubber green is in now. Which was something I was wondering for awhile. These machines (crawlers) as you have depicted them are nanomachines. Currently, with basic programming and controls. But nano's can create or do just about anything they are programmed too. And these machines are both like an insect/spider and an exoskeleton. So I thought why not combine the two? Have the crawlers be able to create/generate rubber. Either by creating the rubber suits themselves with any 'accessories' when they latch onto prey. Or maybe, even acting like spiders that can cocoon the heroes in rubber. Or both. Even doing the brainwashing without any other external machine. They seem to have so much more potential. And an impending gathering of the villain's! The coming meeting between the two Tri-Hards will be a wild ride to read. Though I can't help but wonder if this is all a hidden contingency plan from the actual, physical Tri-Hard. Because Kurt has been acting too much to a plan to just be a need or innate desire to return to what he was. Not to mention H-3's need to return to his owner. Which Nick is now inexorably apart of. He is too 'broken'. And we have seen with too many characters what happens afterwards. And overall, I look forward to it. Seeing big jocks like Nick become slutty rubber slaves is too good to pass up. I look forward to what Tri-Hard ends up turning him into. But either way, it will be Nick's face for awhile that will be seen doing the evil deeds to come.

10/24/24, 5:27 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Ha ha,... you're right in noticing that the **Crawlers** aren't being used to their full potential _yet._ **H-3** needs to draw things out just enough so that he doesn't fulfill his 'purpose' too quickly. It's a bit of an existential crisis for him, but with more direct implications than normal. That's why he needs to get to his creator; he NEEDS to be given a wider scope to operate within before he does too good of a job. (Also this 2-part chapter finishes the set-up for the rest of the story, drawing the lines in the sand, so he can't flex his full powers just yet!) As for Kurt and Nick/**'Tri-Hard'**, we'll soon see how they fit into all this! Kurt's goals have been very 'contradictory', as even Nick's new **Tri-Hard** personality has noted. Kurt has been building 'the MASTER' up, yet pushing Nick down. He has been reveling in Nick's downfall, yet he and the cult wish to become drones again,... Maybe we'll see how it all fits together next time!
10/24/24, 3:05 PM
I'm so thrilled to see my favorite author writing stories again. This was a great concept and hot.. I just only wish the sex acts weren't virtual. Other than that, I loved it. And at the very end I don't know if those examples were virtual or not, but in my mind I expanded it to be actual sex acts.

10/24/24, 3:39 PM
@[HusbandFirst](/user/show/2436468) Thanks for your support! As I noted in the story, even though they were not actually engaged physically with each other, everything they felt were just like the real thing and the orgasms and cum were real every time. They line between real and virtual just became blurry at some point under the demon's influence. The demon just feeds off of their sexual energy afterall, so it didn't need them to get physical together necessarily, which I felt makes it more perverse, impersonal and evil on them. But I hope it was fun for you to read no matter whichever way you'd imagine it to happen. 😉
Jun 10, 2024
6/11/24, 12:54 PM
Damn! I wish I'd had a teacher like that.

Jota23
10/24/24, 12:46 PM
@[1992pt](/user/show/501718) Hahahaha! Thank u <3
Anonymous
10/24/24, 11:53 AM
So hot!!! 😍😍 love how Nick is finally taken down a peg tho hopefully he’s cured of tri-hard, but still maintains his dumb horny submissiveness.

10/24/24, 12:18 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! Nick's little downward spiral isn't _quite_ done yet, so I hope you enjoy where we're going in part 2 of this chapter.
10/24/24, 11:19 AM
Nick got what he deserved for how he treated Henry although his mind is so far gone he’s never know. I feel like I’m going to feel bad for Henry again in this series lol.

10/24/24, 12:15 PM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) Why, I would _never_ bully Henry! He's had a bit of a background role so far as the stage gets set, but he is due his turn in the spotlight soon! You tell me if that's a good thing for him or not,...
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10/24/24, 10:50 AM
Loved this! Some thoughts on how you might developer it. A military complex has developed it to defeat an enemy but it's somehow escaped the lab eg an employee took it home to enjoy. Where does all the 'victim' go when consumed by the hole - could be it use the victim to make more of itself ie 'holes' and then, as the sellers know the delivery address, they turn up and take the new holes to sell to further customers. Could a hole be inserted in the ass so that when having anal sex the top is absorbed through cuming into the ass- 'hole'. Then the person with the hole inserted could cums more 'holes' Could the hole, when inserted in the anus, change the body so the penis gets long enough to self fuck and the 'hole' consumes the victim this way. Could the hole be an alien life form taking over the planet - after the human is another by the hole is might reproduce an alien in the form of a human male. Please write more! Also love the vampire series
10/24/24, 9:03 AM
Vampires! Awesome!
10/24/24, 8:30 AM
Would really like to read how things transpired. Has so much potential. Awesome tease. And, not in a bad way. Great writing.