Recent Comments

May 1, 2016
Anonymous
1/8/19, 2:49 AM
Needs a continuation.
Dec 10, 2018
Tommy
1/8/19, 2:08 AM
Good writing! Easy to read! I like the way he treats him.
Kyle
1/8/19, 2:01 AM
Very well-written. Loved the perspective and control over the hero as a puppet. Thanks!
Tommy
1/8/19, 1:11 AM
Hot Dude!
Tommy
1/8/19, 12:28 AM
Fantastic writing! Well developed characters. Casey is endeering even as you watch him succumb as he must. Sigh!
Jan 5, 2019
Anonymous
1/8/19, 12:18 AM
Great idea! Writing is good! Could be a little more graphic.
Biguycnj
1/8/19, 12:12 AM
i also hope Glen and Pat have a happy ending kinky but happy
Hypnpo'd heroboi
1/8/19, 12:09 AM
You so called heroes are pathetic!! Thinking you can escape your destiny. You belong to MASTER. You are nothing but a sex puppet to MASTER FETISHIST You two better be careful. You don't know how many of your buds are waking up as horny hero sex puppets
Anonymous
1/7/19, 11:31 PM
One way to meet enlistment goals!
Mdlftr
1/7/19, 11:20 PM
Rozza, I like the muscle growth and transformations. For me that is a big part of the attraction of the transformation stories. If you could spend a bit more time describing how Jack's pecs became enormous and how his mind simultaneously "remembered" hours of incline, flat and decline presses to build those huge pecs. How Jack "remembered" entering powerlifting contests with Mike, squatting hundreds of pounds, as he built his big muscleass, deadlifting to build his strong, thick, muscular core and doing overhead presses to build his cannon ball sized deltoids - that would all make these stories even more exciting than they already are! Also, instead of simplifying them both as "dumb," why not have Jack remain smart, except smart in a military sense - being more strategic, better at planning ahead and ambushing and taking down Mike, who ends up on the bottom? LOL - Some suggestions - I look forward to reading more of your work!