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Mdlftr
1/7/19, 11:20 PM
Rozza, I like the muscle growth and transformations. For me that is a big part of the attraction of the transformation stories. If you could spend a bit more time describing how Jack's pecs became enormous and how his mind simultaneously "remembered" hours of incline, flat and decline presses to build those huge pecs. How Jack "remembered" entering powerlifting contests with Mike, squatting hundreds of pounds, as he built his big muscleass, deadlifting to build his strong, thick, muscular core and doing overhead presses to build his cannon ball sized deltoids - that would all make these stories even more exciting than they already are! Also, instead of simplifying them both as "dumb," why not have Jack remain smart, except smart in a military sense - being more strategic, better at planning ahead and ambushing and taking down Mike, who ends up on the bottom? LOL - Some suggestions - I look forward to reading more of your work!
Jan 6, 2019
Anonymous
1/7/19, 11:08 PM
Final picture should have been bigger to reflect the new jock bro Jake!
dogdaes@yahoo.com
1/7/19, 11:01 PM
I need a massage, and I have never had cock in my life
ForgottenCradle
1/7/19, 10:50 PM
oh,I love Lex Luthor! the thought of a businessman-supervillian slave exites me. and bane is quite the stud I love how creative you are with your enslaving
1/7/19, 10:05 PM
I'm with you on liking heroes still being heroes in the day so that element was great. Honestly this was super sexy and besides lacking some rimming i must say it was perfect. thumbs up to you!
Anonymous
1/7/19, 10:04 PM
Please - this is so good! I'm dying to read the next chapter!
Anonymous
1/7/19, 8:25 PM
nice ! this is hot !!
The Jade Ox
1/7/19, 7:19 PM
You'll never get away with this, Fetishist!
Anonymous
1/7/19, 6:26 PM
Amazing!
1/7/19, 6:17 PM
I would like to see a sequel to your story. Maybe Emery and Mark teaming up and breaking in new students