Recent Comments

Jan 5, 2019
Anonymous
1/5/19, 6:06 AM
it's very, very good! I sense this is the starting point, or so I want to believe, you have a great narrative structure and amazing attention to detail, can't wait to see what comes next!
Jan 5, 2019
ljs
1/5/19, 6:02 AM
Needs a gay sex element. A mind control one would also help.
Jan 5, 2019
thames.sobol@gmail.com
1/5/19, 5:44 AM
It's an old theme and somewhat overused but you refreshed it and made it contemporary. Very well done!
Jan 5, 2019
Anonymous
1/5/19, 5:34 AM
Great story, Cris. Would like to see where this goes!
1/5/19, 5:15 AM
Great transformation, body and mind. I don't mind any lapses in story regarding how Mike changed. Sometimes it's good knowing only the result. The unknown, like the transformative powers of the ax and canes, let's the imagine run and the intrigue continue.
Anonymous
1/5/19, 4:04 AM
Truly one of my favorite stories keep up the amazing work
Hypnojock18
1/5/19, 3:11 AM
The MASTER should have his redneck bitch boi start bringing his redneck buds to be converted into redneck cocksluts
Beardfull
1/5/19, 3:02 AM
Good second chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep the hairiness and beardness coming. Nothing hotter than a few horny big hairy guys confined into a wood cabin! GOOD WORK!
Anonymous
1/5/19, 2:54 AM
This is impossible to read. Grammar, spelling, punctuation etc are all over the place. I wanted to be more positive but I just gave up half way. There is no point writing a story if it is this jumbled as it just frustrates the reader. Please use spelling and grammar checkers and use quotation marks every time someone speaks. These are simple things.
Anonymous
1/5/19, 1:37 AM
Great pace on the transformation ! Also, the conclusion of what happened to Beau was very hot. Always love a now-willing muscle toy :)