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fan
10/24/24, 10:50 AM
Loved this! Some thoughts on how you might developer it. A military complex has developed it to defeat an enemy but it's somehow escaped the lab eg an employee took it home to enjoy. Where does all the 'victim' go when consumed by the hole - could be it use the victim to make more of itself ie 'holes' and then, as the sellers know the delivery address, they turn up and take the new holes to sell to further customers. Could a hole be inserted in the ass so that when having anal sex the top is absorbed through cuming into the ass- 'hole'. Then the person with the hole inserted could cums more 'holes' Could the hole, when inserted in the anus, change the body so the penis gets long enough to self fuck and the 'hole' consumes the victim this way. Could the hole be an alien life form taking over the planet - after the human is another by the hole is might reproduce an alien in the form of a human male. Please write more! Also love the vampire series
10/24/24, 9:03 AM
Vampires! Awesome!
10/24/24, 8:30 AM
Would really like to read how things transpired. Has so much potential. Awesome tease. And, not in a bad way. Great writing.
10/24/24, 8:23 AM
I would LOVE to book an appointment! I can imagine him putting a fat cigar in my mouth as he makes my inner biker come out!
10/24/24, 7:47 AM
Excited to see what comes next. The family part is intriguing. Brothers entranced are very hot! Good Luck with the rest.
10/24/24, 7:13 AM
Book me an appointment ASAP 😈😈😈 Another awesome transformation story! You're the best 💯
10/24/24, 5:41 AM
Thanks, but it's not chat GPT. It's entirely original written with a bad spellcheck.
nobody
10/24/24, 4:53 AM
i mean the overall plot is great but you really need to proofread the chatgpt output
Anonymous
10/24/24, 4:37 AM
Great story as always

Pcm
10/24/24, 4:46 AM
@Anonymous Thanks!
10/23/24, 11:28 PM
I really enjoyed this. Bravo! Hoping that you continue the series, and explore the decision-making process for who else the protagonist can welcome into the Imperial Brotherhood (four more). It would also be fun to explore how the protagonist now navigates his "normal" life with his new status, and who he attracts (an old frat brother, a gym buddy, his commanding human officer, the mail man, etc.)

Pcm
10/24/24, 3:10 AM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Thanks! Pavel will have a hard time decidinffwhom to bring to the elite brotherhood he is now a part of. The scope of corruption in this story will be more covert and limited in that sense. Instead of full on mass enslavement. It makes the corruption, ironically, into something pretigious