Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/1/19, 2:20 AM
It'd be thrilling to see one or two now-transformed football drones, chasing their nerd friends with a vacant look in eyes. Like a zombie? Looking forward to see where this one goes. HAPPY NEW YEAR
Anonymous
1/1/19, 2:05 AM
Love this Tumbler style writing : ) You still have two more to go.
Anonymous
1/1/19, 1:28 AM
love leather rubber and suits. maybe make it so that he can only feel comfortable wearing fetish gear
KinkDawg
1/1/19, 1:15 AM
replace Jase in the porn industry
nycboot
1/1/19, 12:28 AM
Your ideas are wonderful - I love this kind of story. But--maybe it's a language barrier (although I don't think so)--I wish your writing could flesh out some detail and have a bit of "narrative smoothness" to make the transitions to/from actions more easy going. Great ideas need to be treated carefully. The way they are treated carefully is with words. :)
Dec 31, 2018
Anonymous
1/1/19, 12:16 AM
Thats a great idea! I wrote this pretty late and didnt think of that. Guess his spell can go awry a little in a second part or he can think of how to make him hate life by having to serve the kid he used to bully! And whom I should give a name...
Anonymous
1/1/19, 12:05 AM
Nice job.
M
12/31/18, 11:39 PM
Awesome set up! I can't wait to see where you take the story next!
Dec 31, 2018
firesix
12/31/18, 10:45 PM
EXCELLENT. A sequel is in order for both stories.
KP
12/31/18, 10:45 PM
This is the HOTTEST story I have read in a long time! Write more pleas!