Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/31/18, 9:24 PM
when they wore their helmets during the game, would they play as commanded by Jackson or the Coach ? that must be a badass strong team and the Coach should be proud of!!
Anonymous
12/31/18, 9:23 PM
fantastic, its perfect keep going
Anonymous
12/31/18, 9:13 PM
Great writing! Very few writers can make their introduction entertaining enough to reach the sex part. The dialogue is also very natural and believable. I've read the 2nd one too. I hope you continue writing.
Anonymous
12/31/18, 9:07 PM
which one will be 81? yum.
Anonymous
12/31/18, 8:56 PM
A great start!! Can't wait to see Bradley drone work with Jackson to transform the others : ) love ha, bro!!
Spandexlad
12/31/18, 8:44 PM
No it wasn't intentional. I try hard to catch that but oops. I've fixed it. Thanks for letting me know.
Dec 31, 2018
12/31/18, 8:34 PM
Very good, I really liked this story, I hope there is a following. It would be nice if the judge also joined them
12/31/18, 8:26 PM
@Slavethruhypno: Thank you most kindly for the comment! As a Dominant, I've always preferred to have a submissive wear what pleased me the most rather than just be naked. While I am not opposed to a naked man (and only if he wears his socks and Footwear), a chubby man in an outfit and Footwear that's pleasing to me would be who I'd go for first. Anyway, I'd want the submissive man to get used to performing in servitude while fully dressed.
Dec 31, 2018
TheD
12/31/18, 8:25 PM
VERY well done. Great concept, and well executed.
12/31/18, 7:56 PM
I greatly appreciate comments and/or suggestion on how to continue.