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Anonymous
12/30/18, 5:21 AM
Yeah, it's working!! Loved it.
wang@yopmail.com
12/30/18, 4:50 AM
like always, the best!
Jacinto
12/30/18, 2:29 AM
damn I love this one too. you great at this man!
12/30/18, 2:13 AM
I actually find it very difficult to write from the hypnotist's perspective, which is odd when you consider that I fantasize about myself *being* the 'tist most of the time. I've tried it before, and it just doesn't come out right most of the time. Prom Night is the only exception to that so far. Besides, it's like pulling back the curtain and seeing that the wizard isn't really all that impressive. :) That said, I'm not ruling it out entirely. There's a lot of things to go through over the next couple of chapters. I'm thinking that doing it from Timmy's POV is probably the best choice, but Peter's POV might be workable too...or maybe split it into two? I think I'd run out of material doing that, though. We'll see.
zefrog3@Yahoo.com
12/30/18, 2:13 AM
can't wait for next chapter
12/30/18, 2:02 AM
haha. I knew it would be like this. hehe good stuff. Though I do wonder if we could get a POV from Peter.
May 2, 2005
Anonymous
12/30/18, 1:50 AM
perfekt and creative story, thank you
Marktree6
12/30/18, 12:43 AM
Brilliant! Fantastic! More please
Marktree6
12/30/18, 12:31 AM
Love Mike's transformation particularly - & yes I think he should be turned on remembering Tyler as a gym hunk rather than fem boy
Anonymous
12/30/18, 12:30 AM
The entire buildup for this chapter is such a sexy slow-burn, this series is genius.