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nycboot
12/30/18, 7:31 AM
Even if English is not your first language, you have an usual talent in expressing yourself. The sequences with Pat are absolutely surrealistic! You write as if there is no time, there is just existence, waiting for the next stimulant. Pat increasingly is disconnected from his memories and exists only in the present and only to serve. Many stories have such an idea, but you convey it with such a strong mood. It's really wonderful. I hope you continue the story!!
Chuy
12/30/18, 6:24 AM
hot as hell man. each spin off is so good
Anonymous
12/30/18, 5:21 AM
Yeah, it's working!! Loved it.
wang@yopmail.com
12/30/18, 4:50 AM
like always, the best!
Jacinto
12/30/18, 2:29 AM
damn I love this one too. you great at this man!
12/30/18, 2:13 AM
I actually find it very difficult to write from the hypnotist's perspective, which is odd when you consider that I fantasize about myself *being* the 'tist most of the time. I've tried it before, and it just doesn't come out right most of the time. Prom Night is the only exception to that so far. Besides, it's like pulling back the curtain and seeing that the wizard isn't really all that impressive. :) That said, I'm not ruling it out entirely. There's a lot of things to go through over the next couple of chapters. I'm thinking that doing it from Timmy's POV is probably the best choice, but Peter's POV might be workable too...or maybe split it into two? I think I'd run out of material doing that, though. We'll see.
zefrog3@Yahoo.com
12/30/18, 2:13 AM
can't wait for next chapter
12/30/18, 2:02 AM
haha. I knew it would be like this. hehe good stuff. Though I do wonder if we could get a POV from Peter.
May 2, 2005
Anonymous
12/30/18, 1:50 AM
perfekt and creative story, thank you
Marktree6
12/30/18, 12:43 AM
Brilliant! Fantastic! More please