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Anonymous
12/30/18, 12:31 PM
yes !! More please
Anonymous
12/30/18, 12:24 PM
dang CJ's becoming such a jerk I hope he learns a lesson or two
Anonymous
12/30/18, 12:21 PM
your writing could use some work but the story itself is hot!
12/30/18, 12:20 PM
This is really interesting I can't wait to see where this goes
Dec 29, 2018
Anonymous
12/30/18, 12:10 PM
cute story! love how the spider puns never disappear, even after their nickname change. they're still nerds, but now with muscles!
Anonymous
12/30/18, 11:01 AM
is that it?
ForgottenCradle
12/30/18, 10:30 AM
hmmm...I actually thought he got the doctor one his side a bit too early,but I am thrilled to see why the whole plan play out now. as always a magnificent chapter I love it
Dec 29, 2018
Anonymous
12/30/18, 10:02 AM
Excellent work
12/30/18, 8:47 AM
Yeah, this really is a terrific start. I hope you continue this story!
12/30/18, 8:29 AM
Please DON'T write a chapter from Peter's perspective. One major reason this series works so well--aside from your gifts with language and characterization--is that we get everything from the perspective of the unwitting victims, rather than Peter. And as written, Peter's such a super-genius that it would be boring to hear all about his diabolical plans in advance; there'd be almost no dramatic tension.