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I keep hopinf for part 4
12/29/18, 7:49 AM
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Anonymous
12/29/18, 7:17 AM
Great, more please.
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/29/18, 7:01 AM
Most intriguing. i love it when the submission is clearly occurring but the sub doesn't realize it.
Anonymous
12/29/18, 6:55 AM
Fuck! Yes! More!
paisaguerro
12/29/18, 6:46 AM
Good points, Vicbiguy. I had made some edits to the story and, from your suggestion, fixed the airplane ride time. It has been awhile since I have been to Bermuda...the flight seemed longer back then, but I looked it up and it averages two hours. I hope the changes I have made meet your approval. Thanks for the help :) @vicbiguy
Vicbiguy
12/29/18, 6:41 AM
This story has great potential and is fucking hot! But it has a few glitches. Bermuda is only an hour and a half flight from New York, not four, and from the Pacific Northwest its more like seven and a half hours. Plus you seem to forget how much cologne you are using, and when did Richard spill it? But, fuck the sex is soooo hot, I forgive you.
Anonymous
12/29/18, 6:14 AM
i read this before and it's been significantly changed.
firesix
12/29/18, 5:28 AM
WITH THE FEROCITY OF AN ARMY OF ROOMBAS???
12/29/18, 4:41 AM
Whoa! That was a hot story. Great sex descriptions, great Dad/son dynamic, celebrates masculinity well. Super idea.
Anonymous
12/29/18, 2:31 AM
Enjoyed this latest story, and would love to see more chapters. You are becoming one of my favorite authors on this site.