Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/29/18, 9:25 AM
Amazing concept. Hopefully only the first chapter. It seems Logan has only demonstrated what he can do.
Dec 29, 2018
Anonymous
12/29/18, 9:25 AM
very cute story ;)
Martin
12/29/18, 8:08 AM
Why don't you start a new series for this spin-off? Seems to be appropriate. And what I always wanted to ask you, is it intentional that you used two different names to publish your stories ("paisaguerro" and "PaisaGringo")? If not, which one do you prefer? So I can fix that for you. - Martin
I keep hopinf for part 4
12/29/18, 7:49 AM
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Anonymous
12/29/18, 7:17 AM
Great, more please.
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/29/18, 7:01 AM
Most intriguing. i love it when the submission is clearly occurring but the sub doesn't realize it.
Anonymous
12/29/18, 6:55 AM
Fuck! Yes! More!
paisaguerro
12/29/18, 6:46 AM
Good points, Vicbiguy. I had made some edits to the story and, from your suggestion, fixed the airplane ride time. It has been awhile since I have been to Bermuda...the flight seemed longer back then, but I looked it up and it averages two hours. I hope the changes I have made meet your approval. Thanks for the help :) @vicbiguy
Vicbiguy
12/29/18, 6:41 AM
This story has great potential and is fucking hot! But it has a few glitches. Bermuda is only an hour and a half flight from New York, not four, and from the Pacific Northwest its more like seven and a half hours. Plus you seem to forget how much cologne you are using, and when did Richard spill it? But, fuck the sex is soooo hot, I forgive you.
Anonymous
12/29/18, 6:14 AM
i read this before and it's been significantly changed.