Recent Comments

ShitPig
12/28/18, 9:14 AM
My go-to story for a good jerk off session.
TimNJ
12/28/18, 7:51 AM
Awesome finale. I LOVE this series so much I hate seeing it end! I cum every time I read it.
ForgottenCradle
12/28/18, 7:49 AM
I second that Superman thing
Max
12/28/18, 7:49 AM
Definetly continue
Anonymous
12/28/18, 7:16 AM
I’d love to see more from you. Very well written!
Anonymous
12/28/18, 6:35 AM
Great writing. Please continue
Anonymous
12/28/18, 5:54 AM
i looove this series!
Anonymous
12/28/18, 5:15 AM
I'm hard. Damn!!!
12/28/18, 3:47 AM
Hmmm I think you forgot to specify exactly how big the narrator's dick got after being sucked on a couple times. It went from +1" to "huge". I also got the impression it got thicker, but you didn't detail that.
rubaluva
12/28/18, 2:18 AM
Unfortunately it was pretty heavy reading as there was only 2 paragraphs and no new lines for speech etc. Perhaps if you write a new chapter you could try doing that, which would make it a more enjoyable read.