Recent Comments

Max
12/28/18, 7:49 AM
Definetly continue
Anonymous
12/28/18, 7:16 AM
I’d love to see more from you. Very well written!
Anonymous
12/28/18, 6:35 AM
Great writing. Please continue
Anonymous
12/28/18, 5:54 AM
i looove this series!
Anonymous
12/28/18, 5:15 AM
I'm hard. Damn!!!
12/28/18, 3:47 AM
Hmmm I think you forgot to specify exactly how big the narrator's dick got after being sucked on a couple times. It went from +1" to "huge". I also got the impression it got thicker, but you didn't detail that.
rubaluva
12/28/18, 2:18 AM
Unfortunately it was pretty heavy reading as there was only 2 paragraphs and no new lines for speech etc. Perhaps if you write a new chapter you could try doing that, which would make it a more enjoyable read.
Anonymous
12/28/18, 1:47 AM
Great series! I'd also love more details about the transformation process itself and/or a narration from the main characters perspective? More detailed descriptions of surroundings, actions and looks might give it more depth and might make it easier to find content for sequels. The more you go into detail the more variation you might be able to find. Thanks for you work.
Anonymous
12/27/18, 11:42 PM
Now that Nightwing is under the spell I'd love to see him turn the tables on Superman too. He's already proven his dominance over the older heroes, and betraying the trust that Supes holds in the young hero would crush the Man of Steel!
Kickit
12/27/18, 11:38 PM
I really liked this. It's hot, I think I would read like... several more chapters of it if you decided to write more lol