Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/27/18, 11:13 PM
The descent into an immature, femmy, dumb bitch is delightful. The braces from the last part were a nice touch too! Mike's commandeering form and new fondness for humiliation makes it all the better. Would like to hear more from Tyler now that his head's running on such useless girly fluff.
Anonymous
12/27/18, 10:57 PM
LOVE the direction Tyler's headed and how Mike seems inclined to act toward him now
absman420
12/27/18, 10:29 PM
I just love this series.
12/27/18, 9:44 PM
Hey, I just read the prelude and I love it. It's funny, I had a very similar idea to make a story, I might write it someday. At the moment I love the premise, and I must say that it was very sweet as Jost acted as a loving and very empathetic lover. :) I hope to read the rest of the story soon. At the moment the premise I love and your narrative is very nice. ^w^
Anonymous
12/27/18, 9:32 PM
One of the best series on this site. I really hope there is going to be more family fun.
Anonymous
12/27/18, 9:07 PM
Excellent work...phenomenal story...Thanks!!
12/27/18, 8:54 PM
Of course :) But I write very very slowly hahaha.
Anonymous
12/27/18, 8:48 PM
I second coach Papi!
Anonymous
12/27/18, 8:46 PM
very hot! i think the fire department needs to introduce the police department to their meatz
12/27/18, 8:38 PM
@sexdroid012 Awwwwww thanks! You're very kind. I will take into account the advice on dialogues. I guess it's my way of writing in Spanish. I first write the story in my language and then translate it, I will keep that in mind for future stories. Thanks for such useful advice! Thank you! It means a lot to me to hear that, I'm glad that my story is easy and interesting to read despite being so long. Precisely I was afraid it was too long. To summarize and be concise have never been my virtues, hahahaha. I'm glad to know you were hard the whole story. I hope you had ... a lot of fun! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Oh, I hope you like my second story too. Although it is a minor story, it was a "quick" project (even though it is quite extensive, again, summarizing is not my virtue), but it was something more impulsive and quick, a funny idea that came to mind. Even so, I hope you enjoy it too. I'm glad to have a critic like you! And I'm glad to know that there are people with a wicked, corrupted mind similar to mine ;). I will be happy to chat whenever you want! Oh, and when I have time, I'll read your stories :) I started writing a continuation for this story once, a sequel, but I always deleted what I wrote because I did not like it. I have not found the proper way to continue this story yet, with a Mowgli already brainwashed. I'll keep thinking about this! At the moment I have other projects also with stories between Kaa and Mowgli.