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Bimarcnj
12/27/18, 12:54 PM
interesting story here hope u continue. i take it that there are levels of admission to the sex club and given that Glen called out Pat's name out loud it would be some fun reading as to how it would turn out . and how Glen reacts to this
Anonymous
12/27/18, 10:28 AM
Very good beginning. Looking forward to this being a good transformation story.
Anonymous
12/27/18, 10:08 AM
awesome! please write more of this story!
Anonymous
12/27/18, 9:49 AM
I love this series! "> slutty young muscleheads who were still wearing skimpy tanktops and shorts in December, because they couldn’t resist wanting to show off their bis and tris and lats and pecs and delts and glutes" this is perhaps, my favorite line in the story, mostly because I wish it described me! lol! Love it! please keep it up! any replacement site for your tumblr?
Anonymous
12/27/18, 9:30 AM
This was very hot!!!! Wish you'd come back and write more!!!
Jason
12/27/18, 7:46 AM
This is one of the best stories on Gay Spiral Stories and very inspiring. Hotttt as fuck, so many potential offshoots, drooling for a continuation... I mean, I could write pages of review as to the technique the author has used here, but the corruption and unexpected degradation of the guys' minds, not to mention the hot physical descriptions... had me edging for hours.
boi98229
12/27/18, 6:39 AM
Thank you once again for an enthralling and even heartwarming story. i can't help but wonder how close and how complex a mix of connections and feelings Cole and Jason might develop over time. Being pushed into situations in which Jason quickly develops close feelings for Ryan, Roger, and Seamus and then pulled back into his connection with Cole must have been confusing for Jason and yet creates situations so rich in love, lust and sex. Cole's business and his nature require Cole to be both very proprietary and still so open to sharing Jason with others. Throughout the story Jason seems constantly in confusion as he is pushed into learning new things about himself and about the possibilities of sex, love and psychology. What a complex web you weave! My own attraction to mind control, power exchange, and the process of seduction makes this story absolutely sizzling hot! i would love to read more of whatever you choose to write. Hopefully this will include more chapters to this story. In any case thanks so much for sharing your kinky imagination and your writing skill. ~david
12/27/18, 6:33 AM
Nothing is hotter to me than a man being ensnared by his own lust. The story is already wonderful, and i cant wait to see how it grows from here.
Anonymous
12/27/18, 6:30 AM
Can't wait to see where this goes, seems like a perfect start to a good formalizing series
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/27/18, 6:27 AM
DAMN! Love how each assigned his proper role! never even considered being a sow -- now i am hard just thinking about it and will finish myself off now!