Recent Comments

screamingmoist
12/27/18, 4:43 PM
@Jason - thanks for the kind words! Glad you enjoyed it, and I love hearing when people get inspired by what they read. This was a fun one to write.
Anonymous
12/27/18, 4:43 PM
Well written and crafted. Great addition to the canon!
Anonymous
12/27/18, 4:39 PM
You gotta keep writing this story out! Sure Pat's indoctrination is complete, or is it! The 'sex factory' apparently has different levels that requires different training. You could get Glenn to cough up more money to choose a different option. From there, maybe he gets to fuck Pat, one on one, and possibly liberate him or 'buy him'. I should write this next chapter. LOL!
Anonymous
12/27/18, 4:13 PM
ops, my cellphone legged and posted my comment 3 times,
Anonymous
12/27/18, 4:11 PM
I wonder what is going to happen to the other
Anonymous
12/27/18, 4:11 PM
I wonder what is going to happen to the other officers
Anonymous
12/27/18, 4:11 PM
I wonder what is going to happen to the other officers
Anonymous
12/27/18, 3:54 PM
Great story, keep it going
Anonymous
12/27/18, 3:40 PM
If nothing else, I'm curious how a "15 years later" chapter would turn out, where Pat's time is up and he has to return to the real world again. Good story so far!
Anonymous
12/27/18, 3:25 PM
more of this story line plz 😍