Recent Comments

Jason
12/27/18, 7:46 AM
This is one of the best stories on Gay Spiral Stories and very inspiring. Hotttt as fuck, so many potential offshoots, drooling for a continuation... I mean, I could write pages of review as to the technique the author has used here, but the corruption and unexpected degradation of the guys' minds, not to mention the hot physical descriptions... had me edging for hours.
boi98229
12/27/18, 6:39 AM
Thank you once again for an enthralling and even heartwarming story. i can't help but wonder how close and how complex a mix of connections and feelings Cole and Jason might develop over time. Being pushed into situations in which Jason quickly develops close feelings for Ryan, Roger, and Seamus and then pulled back into his connection with Cole must have been confusing for Jason and yet creates situations so rich in love, lust and sex. Cole's business and his nature require Cole to be both very proprietary and still so open to sharing Jason with others. Throughout the story Jason seems constantly in confusion as he is pushed into learning new things about himself and about the possibilities of sex, love and psychology. What a complex web you weave! My own attraction to mind control, power exchange, and the process of seduction makes this story absolutely sizzling hot! i would love to read more of whatever you choose to write. Hopefully this will include more chapters to this story. In any case thanks so much for sharing your kinky imagination and your writing skill. ~david
12/27/18, 6:33 AM
Nothing is hotter to me than a man being ensnared by his own lust. The story is already wonderful, and i cant wait to see how it grows from here.
Anonymous
12/27/18, 6:30 AM
Can't wait to see where this goes, seems like a perfect start to a good formalizing series
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/27/18, 6:27 AM
DAMN! Love how each assigned his proper role! never even considered being a sow -- now i am hard just thinking about it and will finish myself off now!
Anonymous
12/27/18, 6:08 AM
Great story! Would love to see more...
Anonymous
12/27/18, 5:53 AM
Aww! It's a love story :)
Anonymous
12/27/18, 5:37 AM
this is a very hot story - i also like the suggestion of including family and friends reaction. maybe you can also include some stuff on hairstyle / haircut change, mandatory face shaving (probably Mr Mainwairing doesn't approve of facial hair at all) and how this affects his personality
12/27/18, 4:54 AM
Hehehe, ok Sir Martin; 3 OK thanks. I'll be concise with the tags. :) Oh no! It is not an interference, thank you very much for your intention. Even so, after thinking about it, I prefer to separate these stories. Because I think it is possible that in the future write a continuation of the first story that I published, which will be a sequel, so for now I will keep these two separate. Ok, understand. Thank you :)
12/27/18, 4:35 AM
I like it. Here's an idea: they all find something in the house (as one of them did say, "we all have things to do") and they become the person that uses that object. We only know Cody's story so far.