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12/27/18, 3:11 PM
I'm not a native-English speaker myself, so I'm not really qualified to comment on your English. As far as I can tell, it's pretty much perfect. I didn't find any obvious mistake, with the exception of very(!) few typos. As a matter of fact, you have a talent for writing in a way it makes your story very easy to read. Usually I don't like long texts, I rather get to the point quickly (see my own stories ... :) ). But you have an incredible way of keeping the reader interested, to always top the already hot description of Mowgli's loss of will, so you just cannot stop reading. I was hard throughout your whole story and that was really special. I can only commend you for that! If I had to criticize anything, it's the way you write dialog - from a technical point of view. In (American) English, you put each speaker into its own separate paragraph i.e. every time another person starts to speak, you start a new paragraph. And you don't use any - or * when starting a direct speech. That actually makes it much easier to read dialog, even though it makes the text even longer. But I would still follow that rule. I haven't had the time to read your second story, and I'm almost afraid that it'll be hard even for you to top the first one :) Well, I feel your mind just works quite similar to my own wicked, corrupted mind, so I'm looking forward to whatever you're going to offer here.
12/27/18, 3:04 PM
I haven't posted any new image-stories since the great Tumblr purge, but my Tumblr is all archived at: https://www.timbr.xxx/hypnothrill
Anonymous
12/27/18, 2:55 PM
i would like Glenn to keep Pat for himself!
Dec 25, 2018
BearlyUnderControl
12/27/18, 2:32 PM
This is literally my favorite story I've read in MONTHS Great progression, fantastic control, hits all the right buttons wooooof
Anonymous
12/27/18, 1:21 PM
loved it! please write another chapter!!
Bimarcnj
12/27/18, 12:54 PM
interesting story here hope u continue. i take it that there are levels of admission to the sex club and given that Glen called out Pat's name out loud it would be some fun reading as to how it would turn out . and how Glen reacts to this
Anonymous
12/27/18, 10:28 AM
Very good beginning. Looking forward to this being a good transformation story.
Anonymous
12/27/18, 10:08 AM
awesome! please write more of this story!
Anonymous
12/27/18, 9:49 AM
I love this series! "> slutty young muscleheads who were still wearing skimpy tanktops and shorts in December, because they couldn’t resist wanting to show off their bis and tris and lats and pecs and delts and glutes" this is perhaps, my favorite line in the story, mostly because I wish it described me! lol! Love it! please keep it up! any replacement site for your tumblr?
Anonymous
12/27/18, 9:30 AM
This was very hot!!!! Wish you'd come back and write more!!!