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Mutabear
12/23/18, 9:51 PM
Amazing work bro. I would love to see more from you, and of this world.
NZcontroller
12/23/18, 8:40 PM
Yes! I'm so glad there will be more. I really enjoyed your story. You gave each character their own personality and making them somewhat imperfect and unlikable sometimes adds a lot of sense of reality to them. Which makes the story so good. They way you explain how the power works is so descriptive and graphic that I am never confused reading them. You have written a a good sense of each emotions that I feel like I am in the story. Whenever I finish a chapter, I feel like I have just woken up from a dream. a very compelling dream that makes me want to go back to sleep to continue. Sadly I cannot go back dreaming again for a while. there's a lot more I want to say but i don't know how to express them. Thank you so much for this amazing story. I am really lucky to have found it. It is so good that I have been inspired to write my own. i have never been a novel reader as I am a normally more entertained by visual media. Now I know what it feels like to be hooked up to a story like those Harry potter fans. Just with more boners. Thank you again! Can't what for VI
Dec 23, 2018
12/23/18, 7:15 PM
Thanks so much, guys. This might be one of my darker stories. It's definitely more along the lines of the mainstream stuff that I write. @Stroppy Author - Thank you! But don't say that! I've read and enjoyed and _enjoyed_ (if you get my meaning) many of your stories while I was lurking on here. You're a great writer in your own right.
Dec 23, 2018
Stroppy author
12/23/18, 6:00 PM
When I read stories by rubbersome, Hypnothrill, Malskin and now you I want to stop contributing; mine is dribble comparatively.. Excellent work!
Dec 23, 2018
12/23/18, 5:30 PM
Wow, this was so incredibly written, man. All the little details work together to quickly form a short but intricately crafted tale, a perfect mix between gay sexual mind control and Lovecraftian horror
Anonymous
12/23/18, 3:45 PM
pizza guy dare dylan to order pizza and cum on the pizza then dylan will eat it. next is that the pizza guy dare dylan to suck his dick. and the pizza guy cum in the face of dylan, the pizza guy take a picture of dylan that have a cum in his face. while brandon watching them in his room. brandon get hard. when before the pizza guy leave he dare dylan that everyday dylan will send him a nude pictures.
Dec 23, 2018
Anonymous
12/23/18, 2:52 PM
^ Man I wish you could downvote comments on this site. FOH with that cheap picture crap, this is one of the best stories I've seen written here.
Anonymous
12/23/18, 2:46 PM
I can't help to sing out the title of this story to the tune of Pitbull's Hotel Room Service. :)
Anonymous
12/23/18, 1:18 PM
I love how Kyle is definitely affected by the CD despite his confidence that he's able to tune it out :D
12/23/18, 1:05 PM
Great story overall. Concept awesome. Didn't care too much for the dog part. But, would have liked to have had the two friends do it somehow. Pizza guy daring them to do that would have been hot.