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HeroFan
10/20/24, 8:46 PM
Masterfully done. This is just about one of the best things I’ve ever read in the SuperHero Genre. Great setup, great conclusion, and the middle? So descriptive, plausible, sexy, hot. You are a skilled and talented writer, my man. This bit, “You fucking pathetic cock slut. Gonna give you what you want…My hero seed…hard and deep…ugh….yeah…. I’m gonna give you ALL I GOT!!! You hear me? Gonna give you…EVERYTHING!!!” he grunted deeply, his breathing now fast and labored, not realizing the foreshadowing of the statement.” Made my head explode. And, “Unghhhh….no…belt……….missing…how………ohhhhhhh…….…must stop him……….must get……control………I need to stop…….” his voice cracked, “…need to stop cumming….but…oh god…….…I…no…control….” his body quivering, being more and more aggressively drained, provided little strength or coordination.” Made my dick explode. Great read. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you!!!

10/22/24, 2:58 PM
@HeroFan HF, Thanks, I appreciate the feedback on what worked for you. Glad you enjoyed it. -JT.
10/21/24, 9:15 PM
Fantastic body switch between Nightwing and Scarecrow. A masterpiece!! Thank you, Sir!!

10/22/24, 2:56 PM
@[John Coldiani](/user/show/10039834) Glad you enjoyed it.
10/22/24, 1:32 PM
Great story. Got me wanking! Look forward to more.

Elm
10/22/24, 2:23 PM
@[DW58](/user/show/10003124) Thank you! I just posted the sequel chapter, hope you like it too!
10/22/24, 2:19 PM
I was puffing away on my own cigar and strokin my cock when I came across this story. Excellent as always. I loved the little detail when he first was walking into the club and another guy just like him got grabbed and force fed some smoke as he struggled against it and then when he looked back the guy wasn't resisting anymore. It really set up the tension for the rest of the story. So glad he picked up that abandoned cigar thinking he could be clever and use it blend in.... and now he DOES blend in!
Anonymous
10/22/24, 1:58 PM
I really love CUM-PAIR boys :laughing: One of the best series I’ve ever read.
Anonymous
10/22/24, 12:09 PM
I'm still waiting...
10/14/24, 11:04 PM
Thank you. It’s something new trying a longer story format. I’ve done some stuff on Twitter in the old days but thought this would be an opportunity to develop characters and plot.

10/22/24, 7:56 AM
@[Robas](/user/show/10001600) Thanks for sharing your imagination. This idea is quite different than anything I have read. I very much enjoy longer stories with rich character development and plot. It's a little slower starting than most in terms of the rating categories, but for good reason. Looking forward to reading on...

10/22/24, 10:13 AM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I love a backstory that helps to explain what happens next 😉 Hopefully if you stick with it, it will all make sense 😈 I have a feeling that Ch 13 will fulfil all the rating categories but of course that’s for the readers to decide. And fingers crossed I don’t break any more of the community guidelines 🤞 Big shout out to the site support team, they spotted some stuff that could be problematic and because they explained it well I could keep going with the story. Thank you for taking the time to comment. I hope you think the style works when it reaches its climax.
10/22/24, 10:08 AM
I don't know what the deal with the obsession to ensure that all characters in a **fictional smut story** are over 18. It's fiction. Has no one ever read _Lolita_? I guess we are in many ways still stuck in the 50s.
10/22/24, 9:21 AM
Damn that's hot. I love the man he became and would love to see more of him! Absolutely love how he ended up bald with thick facial hair! Where can I find that bar so I can be made into a true cigar smoking biker bear? Keep up the amazing work on these!
10/21/24, 3:02 PM
Really well-written and unique, I iked this A LPT!

10/22/24, 7:54 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks!