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Betasskin
12/22/18, 5:59 PM
So hot and well written. Don't forget to change one of the Bois into a skinhead. Diversity. :P
Anonymous
12/22/18, 5:28 PM
Love the story. Having a micro it's always a dream to have a huge one.
Anonymous
12/22/18, 3:43 PM
Well-written and a great concept. Keep it up!
Anonymous
12/22/18, 11:28 AM
Dan is the Man!!!
Anonymous
12/22/18, 11:28 AM
Loved the corruption of Chris! So Tasty!
Anonymous
12/22/18, 11:26 AM
that was so hot!!!
Italianstalian
12/22/18, 10:16 AM
I dare you to continue this story for 20+ chapters :)
Anonymous
12/22/18, 9:26 AM
Greaat
GrowingGeek
12/22/18, 8:45 AM
I really like the idea but I agree, it was over too quickly. The transformation could be more drawn out. How does Josh feel about seeing Jens like that? How does he feel seeing and feeling his own body grow? Does he enjoy it? Is he scared? If you take a bit of time to delve into their emotions, the story becomes easier for a reader to connect with. It's a good start though and I'm looking forward to seeing what comes
Grant Spiral
12/22/18, 8:08 AM
Perhaps you could have Dylan contact Eric when he’s at work, tell him about how he’s under Brandon’s control now too and since Eric already know’s about Brandon’s incapability to resist a dare, he can control them both? Perhaps he can even dare them to fall in love with each other and him or something haha