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Italianstalian
12/22/18, 10:16 AM
I dare you to continue this story for 20+ chapters :)
Anonymous
12/22/18, 9:26 AM
Greaat
GrowingGeek
12/22/18, 8:45 AM
I really like the idea but I agree, it was over too quickly. The transformation could be more drawn out. How does Josh feel about seeing Jens like that? How does he feel seeing and feeling his own body grow? Does he enjoy it? Is he scared? If you take a bit of time to delve into their emotions, the story becomes easier for a reader to connect with. It's a good start though and I'm looking forward to seeing what comes
Grant Spiral
12/22/18, 8:08 AM
Perhaps you could have Dylan contact Eric when he’s at work, tell him about how he’s under Brandon’s control now too and since Eric already know’s about Brandon’s incapability to resist a dare, he can control them both? Perhaps he can even dare them to fall in love with each other and him or something haha
sfhdraws
12/22/18, 7:57 AM
damn, this story is so good. I'm with tempest on this, for sure. being a mind controlled hero for a hypnotic villain is a hot fantasy!! also, while I haven't opened up for commissions, I do often sketch original heroes, you can check out my (shameless plug) instagram under the same name! I'd love to bring Tempest to life!
Anonymous
12/22/18, 7:15 AM
stories with small dicked studs are awesome. would be great if you could up the humiliation/embarrassment factor about his tiny pencil dick. Totally agree on the need to describe the father better, and what a stud he looks like when his tiny dick isn't on display. Be hot if Scot had to service Dave. Maybe Dave makes him wear slutty panties, and Scot's tiny dick is rock hard in the panties. He is totally humiliated and embarrassed, but also really turned on.
Anonymous
12/22/18, 7:05 AM
please bring Bud back the puppy play was hot greta story very well written:)
Anonymous
12/22/18, 6:27 AM
Really good! I Love stories like this and look forward to reading more of your work.
Anonymous
12/22/18, 6:13 AM
Hmmm I like the concept, but it's really hard for me to enjoy it or get turned on by it if the subject can't enjoy it. Hopefully Dylan finds a way to enjoy his punishment.
12/22/18, 5:15 AM
To answer the question The Author put to The Anonymous: No, I myself do not think this is the ending, at least I hope it's not. To say I’m looking forward to whether or not Rubbrsome chooses to continue the story or not, would be an understatement. I really hope he does.