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12/21/18, 2:20 PM
Well thank you for the comment ill put it into consideration
Anonymous
12/21/18, 2:14 PM
It looked like English, but it was unreadable. It's called Spell Check and Grammar Check. Please use them. I would even suggest reposting this story after you properly edit it.
12/21/18, 1:52 PM
This is not only an insanely hot story, it works on so many levels. All of the "You can join. You can become" rhetoric resonates beautifully with the Fraternity setting and the themes of race and class divides that you're weaving through the story. You're one hell of a writer, rubbrsome!
Hypnojock18
12/21/18, 1:12 PM
Fuckin' HOT story,as usual!! Nothing hotter than the corruption of the morally high and mighty into cock craving NASTY cocksluts. I am thinking that Tempest is already under the control of his MASTER,and his MASTER is just toying with him.
12/21/18, 1:12 PM
Do you think this is the ending?
Anonymous
12/21/18, 12:34 PM
is it the end?
Dec 20, 2018
Anonymous
12/21/18, 12:14 PM
third paragraph unfinished
12/21/18, 11:58 AM
I will gladly take that into consideration that was one of my favorite stories as well. thank you
Anonymous
12/21/18, 11:49 AM
I love incestuous role reversal domination. It is the best, so don't forget the father in the next chapter\s :) As for ideas, make the jock do fag things without realizing why, submitting to the nerd gradually. Like a story I think was named "cubicle". Add more humiliated-to-be muscle characters, coach... jock brother... unless you want it to be a short story. Sorry if my fantasy does not go with you, then ignore it.
12/21/18, 11:29 AM
Sure i can do that, I was trying to leave the characters open to the imagination.