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12/21/18, 4:15 PM
@Bulk - I'll have to take a look! @Liam - Thanks :3 @Hynojock18 - Hmmmmm... Fascinating theory. Can't confirm or deny it though. ;)
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/21/18, 3:28 PM
*give you a suggestion
ForgottenCradle
12/21/18, 3:26 PM
Wolverine. just throwing this in here
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/21/18, 3:26 PM
I you give you suggestion again: a young (late teens or early 20s) aspiring hero with healing power get turned int the adoptive son of the Editor and Lightningstrikes, he keeps his healing powers, but can also manipulate the hormones of the others, besides healing, a Support for the Damage-dealing Lighting and to the Thinker Editor, also a hero with the ability to turn his skin into stone, after been turned into the family’s butler, with the villain codename “Rock Hard”
12/21/18, 2:53 PM
OK noted
Anonymous
12/21/18, 2:52 PM
I think you need to make more physical description of the father . the fact that how much of a stud he is would push the humiliation
screamingmoist
12/21/18, 2:40 PM
@Blightcaller - I've really enjoyed your stories as well and look forward to helping carry the mega booty torch!
12/21/18, 2:20 PM
Well thank you for the comment ill put it into consideration
Anonymous
12/21/18, 2:14 PM
It looked like English, but it was unreadable. It's called Spell Check and Grammar Check. Please use them. I would even suggest reposting this story after you properly edit it.
12/21/18, 1:52 PM
This is not only an insanely hot story, it works on so many levels. All of the "You can join. You can become" rhetoric resonates beautifully with the Fraternity setting and the themes of race and class divides that you're weaving through the story. You're one hell of a writer, rubbrsome!