Recent Comments

Dec 17, 2018
Anonymous
12/17/18, 9:25 PM
Excellent work
Stroppy author
12/17/18, 9:25 PM
I'm intrigued. What do you sggest. I can still edit or add an alternate ending
Dec 17, 2018
Anonymous
12/17/18, 8:59 PM
I thought I recognised your name! happy to see you survive the tumblr implosion. You wrote a time loop story for me once. Good times. Stick around!
Bibimbap
12/17/18, 7:49 PM
This story keeps going better and better! WOW! Good job with the 3 bears, I like that. Twister seems to have very powerful powers, I wonder what plans do you have for him. But I still want to know, what happened with Elastic Stretch? I'd love to know how his life became altered and twisted. Would be cool if the edits that are made collaterally are not exactly perfect (that's it, because Jean didn't edited Stretch's persona directly), and the transformed hero is half aware of the changes, but is unable to put any resistance. At this point you have many good characters and transformed heroes and villains. I'd love if you make a chapter showing us how interact with the new universe (you know, what kind of crimes they commit, or "heroics" act they make), or one with an actions scene to see many of them in action, and a t this point, the action scene would be easily turned into an orgy, ha, ha, ha! keep working, please! the story is really cool!
Dec 17, 2018
12/17/18, 6:45 PM
This is great! I can't wait until Jacob and Corey share their cake pops with some of the straight boys on campus.
Anonymous
12/17/18, 6:12 PM
Love this! Please continue
Anonymous
12/17/18, 5:59 PM
I agree! Definitely like the plot... just wish it was longer
Anonymous
12/17/18, 5:56 PM
I love this series so much! The humiliation is great!
Dec 17, 2018
Anonymous
12/17/18, 5:38 PM
Welcome aboard
Anonymous
12/17/18, 5:01 PM
awesome!!